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[–] Sergio@slrpnk.net 3 points 19 hours ago (3 children)

Killer comic. Last panel's a little weak though. Maybe it should break the fourth wall, like the guy looks at the reader and is like: "This is causing all the world's problems."

[–] Honytawk@lemmy.zip 4 points 8 hours ago (1 children)
[–] Sergio@slrpnk.net 1 points 7 hours ago
[–] Ephera@lemmy.ml 5 points 17 hours ago

There's a trope that many comics can be improved, if you remove the last panel. I do believe this to be one such case...

[–] Ilovethebomb@lemm.ee 1 points 12 hours ago

I think removing the text bubble and just having the character's shocked impression would be a good choice.