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I just dislike that Lindon makes so many rash decisions that are just deus ex machinad. It is one of my peeves of conflict resolution in stories especially when it is as heavy handed as it is here. I am generally enjoying the world building and most of the progression and character interactions though.
They also try and portray Linden as a peculiarity but he hasn't really done anything warranting that yet other than us being told such.
Currently on blackflame so it clearly hasn't deterred me yet.
Interesting. I generally cannot stand deus ex machina, so I’m surprised to not really be able to think of heavy examples of it for Lindon. He certainly gets out of tricky situations, but maybe to me it felt like they were either foreshadowed or somebody like Aethan gets him out of it?
I’m planning another reread soon; I’ll have to pay special attention to see why it didn’t register for me in this particular story.
I definitely feel as I have progressed through that it has either gotten better or doesnt bother me as much as he actually has a measure of power now. xD
They still make some odd decisions sometimes.
I think deus ex machina is part of the genre. Very few books, if any, in progression fantasy are able to avoid it.