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submitted 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago) by anon6789@lemmy.world to c/superbowl@lemmy.world

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Thought the Screech story might be a little much for some, so you all get a second post this morning.

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[–] andrew@lemmy.stuart.fun 3 points 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago) (2 children)

Suggestion: Staring Slightly Sideways

[–] anon6789@lemmy.world 2 points 5 months ago (1 children)

You found the missing piece!

[–] Olmai@lemmy.world 2 points 5 months ago

Another suggestion: comma instead of 'while'