I have made a few of these, including one with an external fuel bottle that I never felt comfortable using in the field because the hose was made of surgical tubing.
The best ones you could make were made from a Venom energy drink bottle before they went to the thinner aluminum. I think Bud Lite also had an aluminum bottle with the same thickness. One of the best ones I made from that was a normal hobo penny stove, I threw it in a wood gasifier stove I made from food cans. It supercharged the stove and made it burn crazy hot and clean. 8 minutes on one ounce of fuel to boil 1 liter was good enough to not shave off 2 minutes and add a few ounces of weight with the gasifier.
I switch from my trusty homemade one to a titanium one from Vargo for no reason other than titanium and it works well enough. I also use the Snow Peak giga when I can't use an alcohol stove, it works well enough but isn't as "fun".