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First comic posted here, hope you all like it!

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[–] JayDee@lemmy.sdf.org 22 points 1 week ago (1 children)

Needs higher-contrast text.

[–] CurlyChopz@lemmy.world 4 points 1 week ago (1 children)

Yeah I messed up, I edited it zoomed in and forgot to check what It was like zoomed out (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻)

[–] JayDee@lemmy.sdf.org 5 points 1 week ago (1 children)

It happens. It's always a learning process. Then you get the flow and things start flyin out good quality.

[–] Doubleohdonut@lemmy.ca 1 points 1 week ago

Literally stopped to read the comic because of this thread. It seems promising @curlychopz! I hope you keep posting!

[–] cybirdman@lemmy.ca 21 points 1 week ago (1 children)

I really love the hand drawn style and the characters, but you should really try to make the text more readable. It is very hard to read unless you zoom up close with the HD on (am on mobile). Keep it up though would love to see more of this

[–] CurlyChopz@lemmy.world 4 points 1 week ago

Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback! Yeah, I really messed up with the text here lol. I'll get another one out and I'll actually take the text into consideration a bit more lol

[–] Krauerking@lemy.lol 7 points 1 week ago

Woah that's unreadable.

Give me at least a drop shadow or outline or something. Bold putting white text on yellow and orange backgrounds at 12pt font.