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[-] TheFlopster@lemmy.world 26 points 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago)

Nance's prior arrest records indicated that he was previously arrested for aggravated discharge of a weapon involving a woman.

It needs to be specified if you discharge your weapon and a woman is involved? Because that's...a different charge than if a man is involved? What if it's a woman discharging the weapon? Still phrased like this? What a weird thing to write.

[-] FlyingSquid@lemmy.world 1 points 5 months ago

Would you have been happier if it had said, "Nance’s prior arrest records indicated that he was previously arrested for aggravated discharge of a weapon involving a person?" Because that sounds awkward to me.

[-] sphericth0r@kbin.social 2 points 5 months ago

I think that they're saying that the person is implied, aggravated discharge of a weapon with no person involved is just target practice.

[-] FlyingSquid@lemmy.world 2 points 5 months ago

I don't think it is implied. You can do that in your back yard towards a group of neighbors in the next yard who are pissing you off with a party.

Doing it with a single other person involved is a specific situation and specifying the gender just makes the copy easier to scan.

[-] sphericth0r@kbin.social 2 points 5 months ago* (last edited 5 months ago)

You're right about the backyard but that would involve a person or people. If the discharge is aggravated, by definition it implies that people are involved. Adding the gender of the person that is implied is done for an emotional response from certain groups by not providing context that is useful. We fill in the blank with our biases.

[-] FlyingSquid@lemmy.world 1 points 5 months ago

Yes. Either a person or multiple people. This shows that it was just one person. And the gender is just for easier-to-read copy.

[-] sphericth0r@kbin.social 2 points 5 months ago

I'm not sure why you take issue with the facts that the word aggravated in this context means that the people are implied, or that adding words is not easier to read. It's okay that you didn't know what aggravated means, but it still doesn't change the fact that this is redundant information. Redundant information is harder to read, and the specific gender of the victim does not add anything to the context for the headline, a de facto harder to read title. It's possible that this was done on purpose, or that the author was also unaware that aggravated means people are involved and felt they needed to add words.

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