Always good to see someone using a field they are knowledgeable about to explain the Dialetical process imbued in everything, as Engels would say: "Nature is the test of Dialectics".
I do have something to nitpick though, I have seen it written before here or on Hex about the development being an thesis, anthesis, synthesis movement, and I have never truly understood it and always thought weird that none of the classical authors have ever used those words to describe Dialectics.
Seeing the resume of how you wrote your text, I think I have finally understood what people mean by those words, and in my understanding it's a mistaken view of Dialectics.
The Dialetical method sees the development of everything that exists by the progress of each things internal contradictions, which when the main aspect of the main contradiction changes from the older to the newer, the thing itself changes from being the previous main aspect to being the new one. Utilizing the same jargon, the "Thesis" itself becomes the "Anthesis" after enough qualitative changes. Which is also why it necessary carries some qualities of the old aspect and it also creates it's own "Anthesis" that will eventually take its place in the future.
I don't really know where this "synthesis" came from, but it feels to me like and idealistic view of the Dialetical method where something is born out of the method itself instead of being the process of already existing things.
I think this wouldn't cause that much difference in your text considering you are studying nature itself when using thermodynamics, but I would this can cause bigger problems when dealing with more abstract things like society or economy.