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submitted 2 weeks ago by happybadger@hexbear.net to c/chapotraphouse@hexbear.net

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[MAN 2]: Heh, sometimes that's just the way the cookie crumbles amigo...

MAN 2 cocks gun, smokes entire cigarette

[MAN 2]: and sometimes the cookie crumbles you... ...

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[–] KnilAdlez@hexbear.net 6 points 2 weeks ago* (last edited 2 weeks ago) (1 children)

Pretty good, I've made a few adjustments though, tell me what you think:

[COOKIE MONSTER]: Heh, sometimes that just way cookie crumbles amigo...

COOKIE MONSTER cocks gun, smokes entire cigarette by mashing it in his flapping jaws

[COOKIE MONSTER]: and sometimes cookie crumbles you...

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[–] happybadger@hexbear.net 4 points 2 weeks ago

You would not be able to see the cigarette through his lip fur. This will be one unbroken facial closeup like a spaghetti western.