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He might eat a cookie as he smokes the cigarette as a visual metaphor for shooting the man in the head.
It should cut to a secondary character, also grappling with change, biting down on a cookie at the same time as the decision point of their storyline
That'd be a good idea. The audience would see the cookie and know MAN 2 meant that kind of cookie and not slang for something dirty.
With droplets of milk and crumbs falling to the ground, mirroring the body and blood falling to the ground. This provides a parallel between the two characters doing something that they can't take back